Friday, September 19, 2014

before and after

before







after

2 comments:

  1. The bird is definitely a focal point now Jacob., and I like the detail of its feet, looks like it's coming down to land. in your first piece you had the sun coming OFF the page. that is actually a good compositional device. It draws your eye across the page . You could crop half your sun off, just an idea , then your bird will star even more. I love your watercolour work by the way, nice how you have achieved lighter and darker areas ( tone).

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  2. Great improvement of you art Jacob!
    I like how you made the sun and your bird much bigger.
    Plus you made your hills smaller!
    That was a really good idea!
    Keep up your really good blog posts!
    Tu Meke job!

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